Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Compare sports and social activities with classes and libraries would be a bit unfair because they are all essential part of the school life. But still, sports and social activities are off-class activities and they are not as important as classes and libraries, which are the main components of learning in college.
The main reason students get into college is to learn academic skills, research for knowledge, and find a career path. Classes and libraries are the two parts that can help students to achieve these gaols. And these things are critical for every person and not available in later life. No one would think that sports and socail activities are more critical for one's life path so classes and libraries sould get more financial support.
From another viewpoint, social activies like groups and clubs are the fun parts of life of college. If school put the same effort in these fun parts as in the academic field, that would be a wrong attempt. For exemple, renewing class equipments, hiring new professor and updating new series of books in libraries may needs millions of money. The same amount of money would be too much for clubs and groups. It would be a waste.
Although some would argue that Sports may be benefitial for students' health, sports could be done at any time, even after school life ended. One can do sports like running and playing basketball for a whole life span, but classes and libraries are hard to reach once you graduate. That is why students should put more focus on improving academic skills in classes and libraries before crushing into plenty of works. And the meanwhile, schools should put more fund in classes and libraries to elevate teaching quality for students.
Considering less importance that sports and social activities are and less financial needs, they should probably not recaive same amount of money as classes and libraries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...socail activities are more critical for ones life path so classes and libraries soul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00628930818 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38775347115 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509433962264 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0731985349 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.45110844103 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211161571592 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711795002523 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061734429015 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133888574605 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591945403728 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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