Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many people have a strong opinion whether being truthful is the most important consideration in any relationship or not and therefore it a subject of intense debate in todays community of youger generation. As far as I am concerned, I believe that being loyal and truthful are the extremely crucial in any relationship. To elaborate more on this topic mentioned above, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost conspicuous reason to justify my point of view is that loyalty and truthfullness are the basic foundation of any relationship. What I mean is if we are loyal in our relation with anybody whether its our parents,life partner or friends, our relationsip would stay for long term. It would generate trust which would make it much harder to break. My life expereince is a compelling example of this. Last year, I broke up with my boyfriend just because he was not loyal and truthful to me. He lied to me a couple of times in the past and I gave him many chances to correct his mistakes and not to lie in future but somehow I have found out that he was not being truthful to me despite of forgiving him many times. As a result I have lost full faith in him and I broke up my relationship with him. This example demonstrates how being truthful can help last any relation.
The second reasons to substantiate and indicate my standpoint is telling truth in any relation is good for health especially emotional health. In other words, when we are truthful and loyal to anyone, the other person would generate a blind faith in us and this would make us feel better and happy. For instance, when I was in my freshman year, I was always loyal and truthful to my friend and she was also the same as me so we both trust each other a lot and nobody could break our friendship at any cost. I definitely feel extremely happy that I have somebody in my life that I can trust blindly. This keeps me emotionally healthy since we share our problems and secret with each other. This example of myself illustrates how being truthful in a relationship can make somebody feel joy and gives emotional support and thus keep it emotionally healthy.
In conclusion, because of the reasons explained above, I strongly believe that truth is the most pivotal part of any relationship.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...al in our relation with anybody whether its our parents,life partner or friends, ou...
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Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , life
...ion with anybody whether its our parents,life partner or friends, our relationsip wou...
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Line 7, column 780, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'somebody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
...ful in a relationship can make somebody feel joy and gives emotional support and thu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66421568627 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74581463861 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492647058824 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8855789548 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.722222222 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20382757814 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070351677957 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476263508518 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148858263435 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375612534947 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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