Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are many characteristics that define a person such as being smart, being loyal and the most important is being honest. Honesty have a wide definition and it is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. I personally believe this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First, nowadays exist many problems between people because they do not tell the truth. Many people have sexual transmission diseases and they do not like to tell the truth when they are filling the medical history during medical or dental appointments. As a result, this would create a difficult situation between the doctor or nurse and the patients. Consequently, affect the relationship between them. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. About ten years ago, I went to Africa to participate in a dental mission and represent my country. There I had a few patients with many diseases. One of the patient that I had to see had HIV, but the patient did not write in her medical history. When I started to inject my patient to do a dental procedure she told me that she had HIV and I had to take all the protection measurements to avoid be infected. The gesture that she had with me endure the relationship between me and her. Since that day I realized that be honest is the most kind of characteristic that a human being can have.
Second, telling the truth is an act that is weird for many people. In my opinion, it is as an important as feeding. Many persons do not consider it as a vital thing in their lives so that is why nowadays there are many people that divorce, others that have problems with their kids. Telling the truth has become in an act that none want to practice. People prefer hid their things, their feelings, emotions until they have to show what is inside of them. For example, I have a friend that she is not in love with her husband. Instead she prefers not to tell him the truth because they have thirty years of married and they have two kids. Also, she prefers to keep her in silence and do not expresses her feelings because she is afraid of her husband reaction’s.
In conclusion, I would like to mention that we have to consider tell the truth always. That will keep us away of many problems and situations of the daily life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68126520681 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76519369984 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474452554745 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1391247834 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.652173913 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8695652174 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04347826087 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191146779536 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613189658429 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598690713109 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12281014349 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453539035114 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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