Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Telling the truth is the best way to maintain a relationship. Moreover, truth is the ultimate key factor of honesty and trust. However, a plethora of people contents that sometimes the truth can be harmful for intimate relation and others disagree with the statement. Not surprisingly, the number of controversies over this issue is overwhelmed. Among this controversy, I personally believed that truth is an essential factor but sometimes the truth can break a relation. I feel this way for several reasons I will expound subsequent followings.
To commence with, sometimes not telling a truth can strengthen a relationship and bonding it longer. Besides, truth opinion can make the people dissatisfy which make a person dishonest. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I have a friend who is close to my heart. One of her birthdays, she invited me to celebrate. Before cutting the cake, she wore a dress and asking me about my opinion. I did not like her dress because it was so old-fashion and with this dress she was looking very mature. But, if I told my true opinion she could heart and could ruin the birthday. Thus, I told her, you looked so gorgeous. She felt pleasure and hug me. Therefore, truth is not the always make a relationship better and sometimes untruth opinion can make a strong bonding.
Furthermore, although the truth is the ultimate goal of relation but sometimes untruth can save a relation. Moreover, if the truth is revealed person can distrust his or her partner. For instance, I have a brother who is married and he is a very outgoing person and has a lot of friends. But, I sister-in-law did not like it and they had sometimes conflicted with this issue. But, most of the friends of my brother was from school, so he never able to avoid them. As s result, he periodically went to see the movie, visiting nearby places without telling my sister-in-law. He sometimes felt guilty about this issue but never told her because it can affect their relationship.
To recapitulate, I am on the opinion that truthfulness is a good virtue but only applicable in some situation. To maintain a healthy relationship truth can not be regarded as a key principle because it can make people feel discontent and unpleasant.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86563307494 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94187379919 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496124031008 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1429855963 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.4230769231 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8846153846 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96153846154 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131096549669 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04006875955 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417709614733 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854267233941 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316820746525 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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