Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
College and universities are just like a holy ground for the students. It is the place where students get their knowledge, shape their personality, follow their passion for learning and eventually set their dreams and ambitions and work hard to achieve them. Beside the fundamental goal of earning a degree, each and every colleges and universities also try to ensure their students best possible environment for learning. In order to achieve this, colleges and universities, not only focus merely on teaching their students for the sake of obtaining their degree, focus on what we call the extra curricular activities like sports, events and many other social activities. Thus, I agree with the statement that sports and social activities are as equally important as classes and libraries, however the financial support may be provided as per the necessity or requirement.
As I already stated that the college and university are not just a venue for obtaining our respective degree, it is actually more than that. It will often be boring if there would be no such sport events and social activities in the university. The redundancy of the attending classes, preparing assignments, taking the terminals and boards can take toll on almost all of the students. So, these activities and social events actually help to break the redundancy of the tedious and arduous process of learning.
Similarly, these events actually offer a new avenue for the students with special skills to flourish. Take an example of my own experience. I`m actually very passionate about music and I love to sing and play guitar. When I was in undergraduate, our university always used to conduct a social event in last week before our major festive vacation. And, I always used to wait these event with much zeal as I would be able to perform my music in the event. Eventually, my performance was liked by many of the students and I was also known around the college as a popular singer.
Now, coming to the financial support to these events, i feel that these events are actually few in any academic calendar year and may not require more budget than the usual budget required for other academic activities. Given the importance of these events and also the minimum budget required for conducting these events, any universities can easily reap the reward of these particular events, whatever their financial position may be.
To sum up, I personally believe that the sports and social events are as vital to the students for their development as it is with classes and usual education. Thus, colleges and universities need to support these events financially so that the overall development of the students can be ensured and these students obtain favorable environment for learning as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'students the best'.
Suggestion: students the best
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...nals and boards can take toll on almost all of the students. So, these activities and soci...
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Line 9, column 380, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this event' or 'these events'?
Suggestion: this event; these events
...ve vacation. And, I always used to wait these event with much zeal as I would be able to pe...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... the financial support to these events, i feel that these events are actually few...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, may, similarly, so, thus, well, i feel, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2334.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08496732026 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74417974058 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488017429194 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 746.1 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3313864535 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.842105263 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1578947368 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10526315789 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155799402597 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573108448943 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691290205418 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908932271243 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354009721335 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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