Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
From many erudite thinkers' point of view, nowadays, with the galloping rate of science and technology, the world is changing so quickly and no one can turn a blind eye to the numerous effects of this rapid change on people lives all over the world. In addition, there has been an overwhelming weight of obsession on erudite mind regarding whether this rapid change leads to an extra happiness and satisfaction of the people of the modern world or not. From my vantage point, people are now more happy and satisfied with their lives than people were in the past since there are more recreation facilities and also, people are closer to each other by means of cyberspace.
The first reason coming to mind to substantiate my standpoint is concerned with this issue that in today's modern world, there are lots of recreation and entertainment facilities and equipment which people can easily access to them in every time they want. In other words, nowadays, people regardless of their social position, income and ages, partake in some forms of entertainments in their free time in order to have a whale of time. As an example, I sometimes go to a near park with a bunch of my like-minded friends to exercise and work out. Moreover, the availability of these facilities is dazzling an in everywhere in town, you can see various types of recreational club. For instance, there is an aqua aerobic center in my neighborhood and usually me and my children go there to have a Jacuzzi and also sauna bath.
The second exquisite point to be mentioned is that nowadays, different people of the family can easily access to each other readily through internet and etc. So, if even if we go somewhere far away from home, we never get homesick as far as we can easily be in touch with my family through Skype and telegram and etc. Actually, the Global Village pave the way for us to have in relation with our family and friends and it is not astonishing anymore to see each other at a glance even though we are in different corners of the globe.
To put everything in a nutshell, a broad look over the main points and discussions reveals the fact the rapid change of the world, make the life more happy and satisfied in comparisons to the past since this new world bring with itself different recreational facilities and also, bridge the gaps between different members of family and friend.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind substantiating'.
Suggestion: mind substantiating
...berspace. The first reason coming to mind to substantiate my standpoint is concerned with this is...
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... to each other readily through internet and etc. So, if even if we go somewhere far away...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: IF_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...y through internet and etc. So, if even if we go somewhere far away from home, we ...
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Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...th my family through Skype and telegram and etc. Actually, the Global Village pave the w...
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Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Village) must be used with a third-person verb: 'paves'.
Suggestion: paves
...m and etc. Actually, the Global Village pave the way for us to have in relation with...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'second', 'so', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254424778761 0.229887763892 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.101769911504 0.158761421928 64% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0951327433628 0.0866891130778 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.070796460177 0.046263068375 153% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0486725663717 0.0685040099705 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.143805309735 0.118717715034 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0199115044248 0.0351676179071 57% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61411342038 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0353982300885 0.0309702414327 114% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.103982300885 0.0887237588012 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0110619469027 0.0209618222197 53% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00221238938053 0.0139019557991 16% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2380.0 2387.08602151 100% => OK
No of words: 418.0 408.028673835 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69377990431 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.306220095694 0.338922669872 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.203349282297 0.251872472559 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.145933014354 0.174417080927 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11961722488 0.112833075102 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61411342038 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516746411483 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 58.1410456109 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6684587814 58% => OK
Sentence length: 34.8333333333 20.5533526081 169% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4731053245 48.84282405 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 198.333333333 120.699889404 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8333333333 20.5533526081 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 55.168261563 45.7405998639 121% => OK
Elegance: 1.89 1.45489161554 130% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30705767376 0.300154397459 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.146794122181 0.103427244359 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0808765880868 0.0752933317313 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.641234665964 0.497263757937 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141165098372 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148963581755 0.114077575197 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913421315168 0.0781384742642 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.410511998414 0.336927656856 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0372680490913 0.067059652881 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234252794763 0.210909579961 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845199610339 0.0618886996521 137% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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