Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
At the turn of the new century, with the development of humans and modern technology, more and more people tend to explore new things which make them happier and achieve their dreams. Actually, people attitude towards the world of change is varied from person to person. Although many argue people in the past more satisfied and happier, In my opinion, Nowadays, people are very comfortable in their lives and they are achieving many goals because the life has become faster than before. I would like to suggest two reasons based on my general facts to support the argument.
The first aspect to point out is that many benefits quickly stem from technology. Admittedly, life today has close tie-in motivation and creativity. I would like to mention noteworthy research conducted by CSR institute in India. The discovered result suggest that Seventy-Five Percent of people today indulge themselves in right activities which they are feeling happier than last decades. For instance, I remember when I was a child my father usually traveling to the USA as a business trip by boat in the sea and he was faced a lot of suffering when he traveling because he took much time while the trip without any relaxes and comfort on the boat. Furthermore, he did not satisfied and did not happier at all at that time. But, Nowadays, with the development of modern technology such as big ships and the planes, he has become more satisfied and happier than before. So, technology has a great importance on the quality of one's life.
Secondly, there has been a positive correlation between technology and life of satisfaction. I still affirm the same idea because there is no guarantee that technology contributes to the widening horizon, which will influence profoundly on society and individual life. Take an example a young people fresh graduate from his university and he did not know anything about the labor market and what is the labor market need from him to get a good job and gain a high salary and thus he is feeling his life has stopped because he can not do anything without any guide or skills to help him to find a good job. Therefore, he is feeling disappointment. By contrast, today everything is available and he can be learning anything about the labor market and what is skills he needs to improve his level through the technology. I would like to mention a proverb in my country, that said: "Likewise nuts that need dirt environment to grow, technology is vital for growing and becoming valuable person".
To draw a conclusion, taking what I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that people today satisfied more than before because technology It has facilitated life for humans to become easier for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 557, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'travels'.
Suggestion: travels
...he was faced a lot of suffering when he traveling because he took much time while the tri...
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Line 3, column 677, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'satisfy'
Suggestion: satisfy
...rt on the boat. Furthermore, he did not satisfied and did not happier at all at that time...
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Line 3, column 929, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...as a great importance on the quality of ones life. Secondly, there has been a pos...
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Line 5, column 578, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help him find' instead.
Suggestion: help him find
...anything without any guide or skills to help him to find a good job. Therefore, he is feeling di...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2259.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90021691974 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72161063866 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522776572668 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 722.7 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.5090572616 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.894736842 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2631578947 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26315789474 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143978496084 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416595280971 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473810394103 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100780642662 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662464096991 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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