Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As everything in life is like a coint that has two different slides, people must weigh the pros and cons before jumping to conclusions. After all, each and every topic or question requires a careful deliberation in that there are multiple variables to a truth. Even though some may admanlty believe individuals are more happy and satisfied in present days soceity with this accelerating world, I strongly believe this opinion lacks coherence to some extent. In my humble opinion, people are uspset and bore with present hasty community due to the following reasons.
First and foremost, the majority of individuals would agree with the notion that modern technology is kicking everyone door, people now can't live without using new technology devices. The main reason behind this rationale persons are drifting into using new device, for instance, people are looking to buy the newest phone in the market. In addition to this, most parents spend their time checking social media instead of talking with their children. Consequently, world is altering very quickly, so people who can't afford to buy new device will feel sad and upset. To illustrate more thoroughly, my friend Ahmad last year was working on assignment, it talks about how people life changed in the last decade. Furthermore, he told me people in the past were spending their times talking to each other and families were more connected together. Therefore, they were happeir and more satisfied. Now people are looking at each other competitively as well as families are spearated. All in all, we can't and shouldn't overlook the upsides of living redimentary life in present day society.
On top of this, people in these days have to follow the accelerating technology to live. In the eyes of many people in present day soiceity, people who don't have the money to go to schools and Universities can't live normally, Moreover, people who don't have a certificaties can't have a job, so eventually they will end up in the streets with no food. A great example of this would be poor people in many countries such as, Sodan, can't have a normal life where they can go to schools and learn. Long story short, it's clear as day to me people should follow the technology to live.
In summation, yes, it's virtually impossible to provide a complete satisfying answer to an open-ended question. Although the jury may be out in this given essay but we can come to a mutual agreement that people now don't like their lives compared with the people in the past due to the following reasons and details mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, after all, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2136.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91034482759 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59398982161 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56091954023 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9147195162 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.421052632 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8947368421 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47368421053 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292620468994 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864007712392 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049206861111 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178740638886 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387218549682 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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