Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Whenever it comes to the issue that whether world change is affecting people to live less happy or less satisfied, there are never short of discussions and arguments. Although fast change gives us more opportunity and makes our life easy, as far as I concerned, I would still agree with the statement that they are makes our life depressing and unsatisfied. Even though there stand hundreds of reasons behind my preference, I would only explore some of them here.
First of my reasoning would be that fast growing let people to work more and more, and they spend less time with family. This makes people to live for work without any consolation of life because most people feel rejoicing from their family, children, friends but that changes do not give them any chance to spend time with their family. For example, my sister works in a company with high salary and that salary means she had to work long hours to get more cash. As a result she visit at home only once in a month and she also looks weary and gloomy. This is great example of life without happiness in changing world.
Secondly, in addition to long hours of work, it is also effecting their behaviour. After working long hours they adapting the schedule and lifestyle. Accordingly, they tend to stay alone instead of spend time happily with family. For instance, I heard there is lot of suicide in the Japanese the result of overwork and altered behaviour which means changing world is also change the behaviour of people by negative way.
Last but not least, in this part I would like to share my statement about satisfaction of life. In a few decades ago, we all live together in one big house spending holiday together by playing card, in winter playing snow and sliding and we used to feel joyfulness from the little things, but now things get changed. Even kids in these century is not feeling satisfied with their hundreds of barbies, toys. They want something highly developed. Instead of playing outside they prefer playing video game in virtual world and only new updates makes them happy not new toys. This is very sorrowful.
In conclusion, I would say that this changes makes life more different not in good way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...from their family, children, friends but that changes do not give them any chance...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'visits'.
Suggestion: visits
...hours to get more cash. As a result she visit at home only once in a month and she al...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'changed'.
Suggestion: changed
...iour which means changing world is also change the behaviour of people by negative way...
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Line 4, column 330, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this century' or 'these centuries'?
Suggestion: this century; these centuries
...ut now things get changed. Even kids in these century is not feeling satisfied with their hun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71614583333 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34595816118 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1213564358 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3157894737 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2105263158 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15789473684 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23839964006 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666163799211 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676127054555 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122657838486 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739498103122 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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