Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue that education today is more difficult task than it was in the past some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree and have different opinion. Also, those opponents may have the right to believe in that my opinion and other people opinion is that the education today is easier that it was in the past because there are so many reasons. This short essay will demonstrate some points some points regarding my point of view in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that the rapid technology today has great impact of the student life. The internet helps the student to gather a lot of information to increase their knowledge easily. However, in the past the people wasted a lot of time to obtain the information for their school duties.
Another point why I advocate that the education today is easiest than it was in the past is the ability to access to the internet at any time. If the student need to know about anything, he will be able to use his mobile to access to the internet easily and rapidly. Eventually, he will gain the time to reach to any information. On the other hand, the student in the past have to go to the library and spend a lt of many to buy books.
Finally, it is a well-established fact the teachers today use the internet to improve their teaching ability in their classes by using the latest update teaching ways. Eventually, that will make the students learn easily and. Moreover, that will make the student feel more motivated and increase their creativity.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion, which says that people who hold the opposite idea may have the right to believe in that. But my opinion and other people opinion arer overwhelmingly too much to be ignored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'some points'.
Suggestion: some points
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62797619048 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45806488503 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491071428571 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4069660089 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157190612445 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532631063376 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701829931451 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750030710184 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654320768983 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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