Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays we live in a technology era. There are various digital and analog news platforms to enrich our knowledge and judge an event accurately. All people have thirst of knowledge. They want to learn new things and explanation behind an event. Some people believe that in order to be well-informed a person must get information from many news resources. Others disagree. In my view, People should acquire information from various sources because of two reason.
First, if people use different news resource then they can get accurate news. At present there are various resources to present news. These can be newspaper, social media platforms, blogs etc. Most of these resources are politically and socially biased. So sometimes they do not present the fact behind any event. As a result, people become confused and do not understand the true scenario. For example, when I was young, I was very curious. I wanted to learn new facts and explore different situation. I had a propensity to music. So, I tried to follow the life lessons and routine of famous musician. I dreamt that someday I will become famous like them. In this purpose, I tried to gather information about them from various news resources like newspaper and social media. After some time, I found that most of the information I found on different media is contradictory. Some media reports that they are very generous but others report that they are very rude. Some reports told that very maintain a very tight daily routine, however some told the opposite. So, I become confused what resource to follow. Then a made a plan. I began to cross check the facts from various resources. After few days I found that some resources are always biased. So, I made a list of reliable resources and tried to follow those. This technique helped me a lot and I was able to find the accurate facts. So, this example clearly illustrates that It is necessary to follow different news resources to get actual picture about a fact.
Second, we can learn new things from different news resources. Nowadays the source of knowledge is increasing day by day. From a study, California university found that every day approximately 11 news resources are introduced across the world, as a result news diversity is increasing. Today it is very easy for people to find out what is happening across the world. In this regard, their knowledge is increasing and their skill is developing. For instance, I can provide my personal experience in this matter. I was a callous boy from my childhood. I did not find any interest about what is happening around the world. This characteristic affected my personal & social life. I did not understand anything when people around me was talking about a recent issue. Then I planned to overcome this obstacle and tried to prepare me accordingly. I started to read various news source and improved my knowledge. At present, my friends and relatives admire me very much because I can provide them accurate news with reference, which is helpful for them. So, from this experience, we can easily argue that different news resource is very helpful to develop our knowledge.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that everyone should get information from multifarious sources as much as possible. This effort not only helps us to get accurate details on any news but also develops our learning process. So, every person should remember this fact and try to collect information from variegated sources.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1187, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, talking about, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 77.0 43.0788530466 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2902.0 1977.66487455 147% => OK
No of words: 584.0 407.700716846 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96917808219 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91590194646 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70823075886 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452054794521 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 915.3 618.680645161 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 26.0 9.59856630824 271% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 45.0 20.6003584229 218% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7629205031 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.4888888889 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9777777778 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28888888889 5.45110844103 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 24.0 4.88709677419 491% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204151019239 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448019303382 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067870468299 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143933976655 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424497303573 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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