Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today we live in a technology dominated world. We cannot think of a single day without using technology. Internet is one of the most advanced technology today. There is both good and bad effect of internet. Some people believe that internet provides people a lot of valuable information. Others disagree. In my view, Internet provides us necessary information and its beneficial for us because of two reason.
First, We can learn many new things from internet, Which in turns increases the depth of our knowledge and improves our skill. Nowadays internet is open for all. There are many platforms. they provide free education. So it is a great opportunity for illiterate people to improve themselves. People from different parts of the world and group can improve their personal and professional skill through internet. For example, I had a cousin who not good at math. His parent wanted him to be an engineer. But He was afraid that he might not fulfill his parents dream. Suddenly a great idea came into his mind. He found that there are many free courses on internet about mathematics. He enrolled in several courses. He worked very hard and developed his skill. After one year he learned the basics and gradually improved. He passed his high school with a good grade in mathematics. Later he got admitted into Bangladesh Engineering University, the most prestigious university of Bangladesh. So this example clearly illustrates that we can develop our skill and knowledge through internet.
Second, We can improve our communication skill through internet. At present people are very busy. They do not get enough time to communicate with their friends and family members. As a result they fell lonely and become frustrated. But if can effectively use internet then we can solve this problem. There are various social application which facilitate our communication. They take less time than meet with people personally. For instance, I can provide my personal experience. I am an engineer. I am very busy with my work. I do not get ample time to maintain relationship with my close ones. Sometimes my relatives even complain that I do not pass time with them. At one point, I opened a Facebook account and then a twitter account. I found many of my friends and relatives there. They were very active in social platforms. I also engage with them and found that maintaining relationship through social media is easy and it takes less time. It will not possible without internet. So we can strongly argue that internet in a great way to maintain our relationships and improve our interpersonal relationship.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that Internet provides us various benefits. We can improve our knowledge base through interned and develop our communication skill. So, every person should try to take as much advantage as possible from internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2400.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 473.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07399577167 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86023462708 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515856236786 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 758.7 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 44.0 20.6003584229 214% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 10.0 20.1344086022 50% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2326839752 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.5454545455 100.406767564 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.75 20.6045352989 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.38636363636 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88709677419 307% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214402851831 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480357134862 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615404787975 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14259413851 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710127020601 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.94 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.0537634409 60% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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