Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Occupation has tremendous leverage on our quotidan routine life, It influence in a direct and intangible way. It is utterly important to appreciate its role because of its indelible impact on the society. Although some people hold the viewpoint that it is much ease to find and pursue a stable jobs in our contemporay era than before. However, others may hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. My actual experience and observation of life which has led me to agree with the idea that, in the past it is effortless to find and continue the same jobs for amyn years and fulfill their future dreams than today. In the following esaay,I shall delve into must outstanding reasons.
To commence with, the competition between indivduals are more extreem than in the past. Indeed, this effects on the available opportunities for getting the best jobs with high salary.For example, many doctors today are hard to them to pay even the expenss of their own clinic, nurses salary, and soon. This because although this type of jobs are have ashine future in any time but the competition betwwn the doctors increase as the medical schools that gradutae thousands of their students every year in comparison to the previous years.
In addition, the life pace are moving so fast and it has its withdrawal. Life's dificulties increased dramatically and cause more errands that needs to be implemented. Definitely the invention of the modern technology,have its possitive face but it cause more burden to the people who live during this interval. For exmple, all young people became more demanded for all ionvented technological devices like celluer phones, X- box. and I-pad. Actully , the list is so long. The parents today are need to devote all ot of endeavors to provide these entertainment for their children. This effects their life style as general because no matter howe the secure and high slary jobs have, it obviuosly hard to fulfill their families needs. Apparently it must be taken into account that in the past the children demand was so simple in contrast to their parents jobs which could do a fordible things with.
To sum up, after contemplating the reasons which I mentioend before, taking all the factors into account, I reinforce my idea that today's career are hard to ensure what the future is and this because the increase in the competition for important, lucrative jobs and plethora of our family's needs that are hard to brings them in truth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: influences
...verage on our quotidan routine life, It influence in a direct and intangible way. It is u...
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... getting the best jobs with high salary.For example, many doctors today are hard to...
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...ar in comparison to the previous years. In addition, the life pace are moving so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, however, if, may, so, for example, in addition, in contrast, in contrast to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2060.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95192307692 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63335778138 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564903846154 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.5231431573 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.444444444 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104569072117 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291522027442 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343698000143 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668363062268 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139046908465 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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