Do you agree or disagree with the following statement.
It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.
It goes without saying that in such a sophisticated world where people are putting all of their efforts so as to find a suitable job guaranteeing their future life, taking the on-counter alternatives into account would be almost a rational task. Some people are inclined toward the opinion that children should find a thoroughly new job differing from their parents' whereas others hold exactly the opposite perspective. As far as I am concerned, it will be extremely profitable for children to continue their parents' careers. In the ensuing paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that since they spend a noticeable period of their childhood beside their parents, it is obvious that they will become familiar with their job. Therefore, they have much more time in order to adapt themselves to the job which is going to be the source of their income in future life. Moreover, it is of great possibility that they gain a host of experiences because they can help their parents in their leisure time. They can even grasp some experiences by just looking at their parents’ working. These experiences would definitely help them develop with an incredibly growing pace.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that people would get fame if they go on their ancestors’ career. To clarify, take the example of an extended family in which the father's job is identical to the grandfather's and the boy has decided to continue his father's job. People living nearby who knew the grandfather will be informed of the fact that this job has a hereditary characteristic. Hence, the great family is going to be famous for that particular job as it passes from one generation to another. It could be unfair not to mention the fact that the more fame a person gains in a specific field, the more income he would have from his niche. Consequently, it would provide him with a brilliant future.
To put it briefly, if one weighs the merits and demerits of the aforementioned statement, one soon realizes that keeping the job of parents is most likely to be a lucrative job in future. But that was the story in a nutshell. In fact, there are a multiplicity of other reasons, challenging the above statement, which could be mentioned but are not embraced due to the dearth of time.
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Discourse Markers used:
['briefly', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'whereas', 'as to', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.2 0.229887763892 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.168181818182 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0863636363636 0.0866891130778 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.05 0.046263068375 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0795454545455 0.0685040099705 116% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122727272727 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0454545454545 0.0351676179071 129% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.79314436833 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0340909090909 0.0309702414327 110% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.111363636364 0.0887237588012 126% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0318181818182 0.0209618222197 152% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0136363636364 0.0139019557991 98% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2371.0 2387.08602151 99% => OK
No of words: 401.0 408.028673835 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91271820449 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326683291771 0.338922669872 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241895261845 0.251872472559 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16957605985 0.174417080927 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109725685786 0.112833075102 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79314436833 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528678304239 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 59.3145304712 59.2087087015 100% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2777777778 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0786128566 48.84282405 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.722222222 120.699889404 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2777777778 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.722222222222 0.644075263715 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 46.4673039623 45.7405998639 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.23664122137 1.45489161554 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356929405336 0.300154397459 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.115604479107 0.103427244359 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0656681454942 0.0752933317313 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.514872870756 0.497263757937 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.171649738063 0.151897553556 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139538558922 0.114077575197 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676491111557 0.0781384742642 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.396342556491 0.336927656856 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0740612413918 0.067059652881 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256234807873 0.210909579961 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210552939201 0.0618886996521 34% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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