Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
Nowadays, education plays an indispensable role in every student’s life. Contrary to the common statement that students should focus on one major and deeply learning, I firmly believe that students would have a better development, if they are equipped with various knowledge.Here are main reasons for my opinion.
Firstly, it is beneficial for students to have a clear insight into their careers of future.The reason is that students will realize what they are actually interested in by studying different subjects. Besides, in this way, students would be more specific to choose the career that is suitable for them, since the interests is the best teacher. Take myself as an example.When I was a freshman, I always bothered about what a kind of job should I have. Fortunately, after learning a variety of knowledge from different subjects, I argued that finance really attracted to me, and I extremely want to be an accountant. To a degree, if I set up a goal, I would work harder than ever before.Therefore, it is an appropriate way for students to learn various knowledge.
Secondly, students would make new friends more easily if they have a broad knowledge.it is because that when meet with a stranger, students are always feel embarrassed due to the fact that they almost have no common topic with each other. Therefore, if students have different kinds of knowledge, they could chat with new friends easily with the confident mood, since students are familiar with every topic people put forward. here is a case. my sister, Ann, was a kind girl who had many friends from different major at college. I was surprised that she has a really amazing interpersonal skill.However, after chatting with her, I started to understand the reason why she had magical power to be popular is that she attended various classes to learn different knowledge, and it is easy for her to make new friends due to the same major. Without the support of broad knowledge, students are more likely to miss the opportunity to make more new friends.
Admittedly, students concentrated on one major are more likely to get offer from the company because they deeply learn much detailed knowledge in a specific field. however, under the rapidly change of social development, more and more companies completely need the compounds talents, since people could own more effective methods to overcome the difficult with the help of the broad knowledge.
In a word, studying various subjects have a positive effect on our lives. therefore, I contend that students should learn broad knowledge to enrich themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2167.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06308411215 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87843924401 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514018691589 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.598461696 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.470588235 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1764705882 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141726349871 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485190275414 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378040474568 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918843620671 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329366148536 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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