Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As we all live on the same planet directly or indirectly we affect each other’s lives. Personally, I believe that it is crucial to be aware of world events, even if they are not connected to you. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in following essay.
First of all, as a social being we have to be know about actions around us, to be concerned about what may happen to us. We may think that some revolution in other country will not make a change in our lives; however, it may have an impact to our government which absolutely is able to disturb our routine. My personal experience is a compelling example for this. This summer while watching news with my parents I heard that in one of the neighboring countries people raised a protest; I did not give any meaning to this action, because it had nothing to deal with me. However, after couple of week in my citizens of my town went on protest about the same issue it was before in neighbors. I was shocked, my mother did not let me to go out, so spent a week at home.
Secondly, it is never excessive to know a little bit more and it will advance our understanding of political structure of different countries. As we grow we need to develope our intelligence in variety of spheres, so analysis of current events in different locations well be beneficial for our mental growth. For instance, I am interested in world politics and in the future I want to become a politician, so knowing and analyzing actions and events out of my home country help me to understand the system and may be in the future I will be able to change the system to better one.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that awareness of world events is crucial in our lives. This is because it can somehow indirectly affect us, and it actually helps for mental development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...condly, it is never excessive to know a little bit more and it will advance our understand...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47965116279 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65266048068 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546511627907 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.56923728 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.733333333 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151725306242 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503182847085 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400461034681 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840383429405 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321707878798 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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