Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this modern society, all day there is a new event that has been happening. knowing about all of them, can be confused and also annoyed you in some way, but on the other hand it may be essential. The inevitable question which has always caused heated debate among people is whether it is crucial to know about the worldwide happenings even though there will not have influence on your diurnal life or not. I think it is cardinal and in the following paragraphs, two conspicuous reasons will cogently substantiate this perspective.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that if you know about events happening around you, you will be able to decide for life. For example, eight years ago, I decided to pursue my education abroad. I did all the preparation that I needed to apply for a university. I took TOEFL and GRE exam, I translated my documents, I talked to my professors to fill out my recommendation letters, I search for my desirable university and send my application to it, and so on. In the sequence of my endeavors, I finally got permission to attend some of that universities, although without any funds. I decided to pay for its tuition fee by myself. but, as I did not be aware of what was happening around me, the change rate of dollar in my country had been increased and I am no longer could be afford the cost of studying in another country.
Another equally important point is that it makes you able to participate in social chat and be familiar with the others opinion. Whenever people gather together in a place or also in modern life, in social communities app, people react to important happenings which are taken place in the world. For example, I can mention Bam earthquake in iran. when it happened, a lot of people were died and there were a lot of damages. when the news spreaded out, not only the people of all over the iran, but also the other countries came and helped to search for people who were died, to supply them with necessary staple.
To make a long story short, I can say it is important for people in the hectic society to be aware of what is taken place around them. it is important because of two reasons of deciding for your own life and can be participate in social chat.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, so, for example, i think, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54567901235 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6111038146 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5482595468 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.277777778 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175103066761 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542644401635 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647643662918 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114837708521 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478582499859 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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