Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life
Awareness of how people live in other parts of our planet can be highly beneficial. Personally, I agree with the statement that it is crucial to be aware of what is going on around the Globe. There are a few reasons why I hold this opinion.
First of all, when people know that something terrible is happening to others on the other end of the world, they can help each other. Nowadays, modern technology, such as the Internet, let us participate in a life of people who we even do know in person, but who we can support when they desperately need it by providing them with food, shelter and fresh water. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When a few weeks ago, people from Texas were suffering from extensive flood, my husband and I sent them fresh water, clothes, and food. It was feasible to accomplish because of the media`s reports from Texas and my habit to watch News on television. If I had not watched the News regularly, I would not have known that people in the United States were in need. This is why it is extremely important to know what is happening in the life of others on the planet.
Secondly, when a person has information about the life of people from all around the Globe, he can share this information with others and become a valuable member of the society. People who have knowledge are interesting for others, they are fascinating to talk with, and from them, we can learn something new. For instance, as I said before, I have a habit to watch News on television. This makes me informed in different aspects of life, such as politic, economy, and climate problems. Because of this, it is always easy for me to find a topic for a conversation with a variety of people from different countries, which helps me to build a friendship with people from all around the world. To that end, my interest in worldwide affairs benefits me with a myriad of friends.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is indispensable for people to be interested in events happening all over the world. This is because it can result in pivotal support for those who in trouble and can help individuals to socialize.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57402597403 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65464965358 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501298701299 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.052573285 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8333333333 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3888888889 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159598616092 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513901259897 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555877243679 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938793482672 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246560385056 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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