Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Throughout history, the relation and correlation of countries have been in dispute. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is whether it is crucial to be aware of events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Some people possess the conviction that it is not necessary to know news about other countries whereas others hold exactly the opposite and allege that it could be absolutely beneficial to be aware of incidents of other nations. I personally contend that different countries have influence on each other and it is very important to be well-informed about each other. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind to elucidate my standpoint is concerned with this issue that in the modern era, by advancement in communication technology and also ground and air transportation and son on, the dependency of countries in many aspects has reached its peak. In other words, although one country might claim that it is utterly independent, In reality it is not true and inherently all countries are dependent to each other. To shed light on this issue, you can consider the effect of countries in economical and political realm. Had a country stopped importing goods from a second country and embarked on importing from a third country, it would significantly affect the economy of not only the second and third countries, but also whole of the countries surrounding them. As a result, other countries play a pivotal role in economy and politic of a supposed country and the awareness of them is very important.
The second rationale behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that as an environmental point of view, all countries have effect on each other. there is a famous proverb which state "if one butterfly fly in one side of the Earth, this act could have influence on other side of the Earth". One of the most important issues in the 21st-century is global warming. All countries in different proportions are responsible for this horrible phenomenon. By way of illustration, the production rate of carbon-dioxide plays a key role in this terrific trend. Thanks to the fact that this phenomenon is not a local environmental problem and has a detrimental effect on whole of the Earth, we have to be aware of them and attempt to prevent from continue of this catastrophic process.
In conclusion, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, one soon realizes that not only we should know about events happening in other countries, but also it is crucial that we have an appropriate insight to these incidents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind elucidating'.
Suggestion: mind elucidating
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Suggestion: There
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, second, so, third, well, whereas, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2276.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0465631929 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9984812684 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49667405765 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.0 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.2180853934 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.882352941 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5294117647 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110958963034 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372930447504 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073564612719 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747621665117 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635077882686 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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