Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, regulations of working hours is a matter of debate all over the globe.Some firms and governments are trying to apply various schedules in order to organize working hours and days.I agree with the statement that it is more joyous working three days a week for long hours in a job than working five days a week for shorter hours.I feel this way for three main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, using of time effectively is crucial today. Most people work long hours in a day and complain about limited time for doing things they like or should do.For instance, if I had a three days working job, I would spare my time for my hobbies.I would do sport, paint, shopping etc.I often face time problem doing these things in the evenings because of working daytime and being tired at the end of the day.Thus, people can spare their time for more things with working three days a week.
Second point is that, people may need to find a part time job on the side.Working three days a week makes this possible.For example, when one of my cousins went to abroad 2 years ago and he found a job for working 3 days in a week.Then, she was faced with paying rent problem because of the high prices in the city she was living.For this reason,she found a job for working home office for a while.If she had a one job with 5 working days she would not find time for another job to earn more money.Finally, working three days in a week may provide opportunities for financial problems.
Thirdly,most people spend very limited time with the loved ones because of long working hours.Shortage on the work days help people spending more time with the people they love.In addition to this, parents do not need a someone or a place for taking care of their children.They may find opportunity to observing educational development of their children.For example, I am working 5 days a week so i see my son only in the evenings for a few hours in a day except weekends.Another important thing is that i need hiring a babysitter for him.This is a most common problem for mothers who work for five days in a week.
To sum up, even though working three days for long hours may be difficult physically than working five days in a week for shorter hours, when all the things are taken into consideration,it is more advantageous.It would provide people to spare their time with their hobbies,their family or loved ones and some opportunities for a second job .I am of the opinion that it will be more common in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, second, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56798245614 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67591939166 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449561403509 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 76.0 20.1344086022 377% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 181.013274529 48.9658058833 370% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 347.166666667 100.406767564 346% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 76.0 20.6045352989 369% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.8333333333 5.45110844103 419% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.5376344086 542% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429935571219 0.236089414692 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.262608895812 0.076458572812 343% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115988102073 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30761080009 0.150856017488 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538200196803 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.1 11.7677419355 324% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.26 58.1214874552 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 10.1575268817 301% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.41 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.01818996416 125% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 32.4 10.0537634409 322% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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