Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People typically acquaint with different people in the workplace, university, library and so on every day. They sometimes cement a relationship and become friend for a long time. Therefore, when it comes to the question whether it is important to keep old friends than to make new friend, different people adopt different attitudes toward this question depending on their characters and educational backgrounds. On the one hand, there are people who adhere to belief that keeping old friend means more support when they have difficulties; on the other hand, others believe that making new friend has outstanding merits. As far as I am personally concerned, the latter carries further weights since not only does it help people to learn new things but also can people develop their social skills.
Humankind always tend to have new experiences and making new friends is the most exciting ones. In fact, people tend to make new friend since they are so curious and like to discover new stuffs such as new personality, skill and trait. Making new friend help people change their monotonous life to a happy life with a lot joyful moments. Moreover, having new friend means new skill is waiting for people to be learnt. For instance, people usually become friend with their colleagues to learn something about their work but they continue their friendship even after accomplishing their goals. Therefore, making new friend bring people new experiences with a lot of delightful moments.
Making new friend develop people’s social skills. In fact, having new friends means people have new ears to tell their life story and receive their opinion about their life. Moreover, people can share new stuffs with their new friends and have fun together. On the other hand, to make friend with new person people learn how become close to stranger and interact with them. For instance, there are people who are introverted and always like to be alone and becoming friend with such person required people to learn about the characteristics of such people. Therefore, their social skills will be developed during this process.
To wrap it up, making new friend not only does it help people to have more delightful life but also does it allow people to socialize and develop their social skills. But, people should also consider the fact that becoming friend with strangers have also its demerits such being abused for some personal goals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
... long time. Therefore, when it comes to the question whether it is important to keep old friends tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0925 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46965458111 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4475 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4457367872 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.210526316 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0526315789 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18088951735 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861611784083 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051537415636 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136480135051 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355332550432 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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