Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Although there is no simple answer to this question, I profoundly agree that life today is easier and more comfortable compared to our grandparent's childhood. When people were asked about their life habits and life style, the would say that the modern high technological revolutions brought enormous benefits to our life such as developed transportation, cars, computer, smart phone, efficient hospital services, useful product and so on.
First of all, it is widely believed that few decades ago life was so nice where people hadn't any issue, problem and stress. Certainly, it is hard to imagine our life routine without these technological products. By way of example, my grandfather told me that life was with full of difficulties including a lot of incurable diseases. My grandmother diagnosed by lung cancer which couldn't treated and recovered in that time. It was that sad store I ever heard about because I hadn't seen my grandma's real face, just from the old pictures.
Furthermore, there is no doubt that nowadays high developed technology offers us great opportunity to enhance the way of living and facilitate every works we face to. I can recall my situation which is related to house-wife works. When i gave a birth and become a mother of my 5 years old son, there were plenty difficulties that I couldn't handle and manage all things in same time. So, I decided to buy dish washer and automatic laundry machine at home. As a result, they really facilitate my house-working jobs and i feel more convenient.
Finally, I bet every people hold different attitude towards this question and it doesn't necessarily mean that life before few decades age wasn't comfortable. Particularly, these latest products and services are playing in important role in our life and nobody could argue with this statement. For instance, the cell phone gave us big chance to communicate and keep in touch with each other even when we are in long distance. My parents used to write letter while my father was studying for doctor degree.
From what I discussed so far, I can draw a conclusion that people are searching and looking for new things which help them and make easier. Based on this needs and demand, big technology companies are also aiming to introduce useful facilities to our life. I hope that our world will be more safe and convenient day by day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, if, look, really, so, while, for instance, i feel, no doubt, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93467336683 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73775743536 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625628140704 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.817825181 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.368421053 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9473684211 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163268569595 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454361626563 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500464352098 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894859335585 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525931698148 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.