Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Quite a few individuals complain about the advertisements between TV shows. However, such advertisements are made so successful that they exert tremendous effect on our lives. As is shown when we go shopping, we give priority to products shown on the advertisements and hold the belief that those commodities are of great quality. Admittedly, some of the products sold though advertisements indeed are convenient and efficient to use, as is said in the television. Especially when it comes to distinguished car company, the car displayed in the television share the same high-quality with ones in reality. There is no denying the fact that these cars are fairly speedy and comfortable to driver as many customers expect. Nonetheless, it is not always the case when referring to most of commodities. First of all, some manufactories tend to exaggerate key features of items in order to catch customers\' eyes. The main purpose of these enterprises is to earn money as much as possible without violating the laws. Crazy about attracting tremendous customers, they come out with all kinds of strategies, including emphasizing and exaggerating the core function of products. For instance, there is a company selling soap. In the advertisement, when the little girl tries to catch a butterfly, she falls down and lets some stain and dirt on her white clothes. Then in the next scene her mother uses the soap to clean them up in a few seconds. While in reality, these soaps could serve the function of cleaning things up yet taking a long time. Furthermore, sophisticated companies are more likely to emphasizing the good side of products and cover the drawbacks of them. Some of these items could have fatal drawbacks and it is not likely for people to spot them. Take cell phone for example. One of phone manufactories named Xian mi win large popularity among Chinese market. It is considered as the most successful products with a good looking appearance and a high-speed capacity. However, when the summer comes, it will send out too much heat that nobody could hold it with hands. To sum up, it is the common phenomenon that products in the advertisements seem better than they really are because the companies manage to cover its drawback and emphasizing on its core functions too much.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 344, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ities are of great quality. Admittedly, some of the products sold though advertisements ind...
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Line 1, column 779, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the commodities') or simply say ''most commodities''.
Suggestion: most of the commodities; most commodities
...s not always the case when referring to most of commodities. First of all, some manufactories tend ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, look, nonetheless, really, second, so, then, while, for example, for instance, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98429319372 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96926038315 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575916230366 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4909212725 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1904761905 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47619047619 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138592755835 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348190137351 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450614905845 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138592755835 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.