Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Parents are the people who have always been the source of love and support for their children. They mostly assist on academics and social life of their children because these are the most crucial elements of a human. However, some people concerned that nowadays, parents take care of their children's education more than they do in the past while others disagree with it. From my point of view, because of the harsh and complex society, the attention of parents toward the education of their children diminished from that of the past parents'.
To begin with, because parents required to work for long hours every day, they have less leisure time to spend with their children than in the past. In order to make life more engaging and easier, everyone in the world concentrates on to develop the technologies rather than their next generations. Moreover, because the quality of teachers decreased considerably in the last decades, the educational system of every country has become worse day by day. As an illustration, in my country, most people prefer to study abroad when they graduate to get more high-qualified knowledge from a better university.
Furthermore, there are many people and popular ones who became successful without high-school knowledge. These people leave a wrong imitation for the young children and also most parents agree with it because they have a lot of work to do, they wish to live easily without any pressure. Besides, because society has a great influence on the children, the parents could not change the mentality of their children. For example, one of my cousins always receive bad grades and plays computer games for a long time every day. When I asked him, why he never worries about his future, he said that he wants to live like his father who did not graduate from university and now become a builder.
All in all, because of many factors such as the free time of parents and society, most children live without worrying about their future. Also, regardless of how the parents influence positively on their children, the negative ones considerably outweigh its pros.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98866855524 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54538528892 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543909348442 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.6008129947 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.4 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250911721346 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968634231383 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824266487414 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171657629866 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718002152095 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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