Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment – doing things they like to do – rather than doing things they should do. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In my perspective, contemporary lives are more desirable than before because people allocate more time for their own interests, whereas people have neither enough attention nor time to their penchants before.
Actually, I really agree with this type of life and prefer nowadays lives because “life is too short, enjoy” is a statement that a person should signalize in his or her life.,
when mankind attend himself or herself, their self-confidence will be increased and actually, they respect themselves by this way. Suppose a man who works during whole the day and when he comes back home, he should serve his family. In Fact, he did not dedicate a particular time for himself and after passing some years, he will be exhausted and can not continue this act. Eventually, he will get which this behavior is not true, fundamentally. Thus, people should enjoy their lives by allocating a specific time for proceeding their interests.
Additionally, a person by assigning enough time for his or her penchants, improves their personality. but when they are under pressure of a boss, parents etc. and perform something which do not like, somehow, they are humiliated because of not receiving enough consideration to their interests. Indeed, coercion has a lot of inappropriate consequences in peoples’ life; in my opinion, it has an inverse result. For instance, when I was a schoolchild, I personally studied my lessons. but, while my parents urged me to study, I could not study properly and my efficiency decreased.
As a result, in my idea, people themselves should think about their interests and dedicating enough time for it. Great said “If you do not care about your mentality, remind anyone is not concerned about that insomuch you can be; hence, enjoy, enjoy and enjoy consecutively.” In addition, remember “you live just once.” Accordingly, you should do things you like not things which you are obliged.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: But
... penchants, improves their personality. but when they are under pressure of a boss,...
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Suggestion: But
...child, I personally studied my lessons. but, while my parents urged me to study, I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, but, hence, if, really, so, thus, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23885350318 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03163470058 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59872611465 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.9041009255 48.9658058833 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 5.45110844103 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224488227927 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063568661698 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680014023022 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115232926872 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694993505504 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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