Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Reading is more educational than watching movies or TV.
It is undeniable fact is that reading is essential for the personal development. It transfers knowledge, author's thoughts and it helps to spread awareness. It is also true that watching movies and TV gives valuable information on various topics but not all the times. Sometimes the movies and TV is apocryphal between actual news. However, I firmly support to the statement that 'reading is more educational than watching movies or TV' for several reasons.
First of all, the exquisite point to be mentioned is that reading plays an important role in a person's educational development. For example, If the educators educate the students with electronic equipment like TV, movies etc to understand the topic. This would discourage students to read books and gain knowledge. Indeed, the books and articles are the basic and primary resource of education of any field like arts, science etc. If we refer the books, then we would get the correct and appropriate information to master in the respective field. Because these books are written by an author who are erudite in the selected field. These books are published for the purpose to elucidate the student with accurate information. By doing this, the students will develop an interest in reading and they will motivate to read more books and gain knowledge. Thus, it is essential for every citizen in society to learn the reading, it is difficult to survive in society without reading.
Secondly, reading gives worldwide information for awareness. In last week, my 10-years nephew read one article that malaria virus has spread in the society. My grandfather was not aware of this because he can not read and write, but my nephew informed my grandfather about this deadly disease and explained to him how to prevent this disease by avoiding exposure to the public places and taking prevention actions so that the mosquitoes would not bite and spread the disease. This example illustrates that my grandfather who was illiterate was not aware of the things happening in the society whereas my nephew who got to know about this information through reading helped him to aware about the disease. Thus, the reading has many advantages for the development of an individual as well as for society.
In addition to it, some may argue that movies help to educate the topic very well in a short time and provides essential information. Apparently, reading is time-consuming. Indeed, the reading is time-consuming but the time invested in reading does not go vain. For example. In last month, I read an article on science history, I came to know the famous scientist like John Nash, Alan Tury and Ramanujan. I read the different article based on these famous personalities, then I watched movies and I could relate the reading with the movie.
To wrap up, I would utterly believe that reading makes a person perfect. It helps to educate and to develop individual development which leads to the country's development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ughts and it helps to spread awareness. It is also true that watching movies and T...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...hing movies or TV for several reasons. First of all, the exquisite point to be ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...that reading plays an important role in a persons educational development. For example, I...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tion to master in the respective field. Because these books are written by an author wh...
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...to survive in society without reading. Secondly, reading gives worldwide inform...
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... an individual as well as for society. In addition to it, some may argue that m...
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...ld relate the reading with the movie. To wrap up, I would utterly believe that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, whereas, as for, for example, in addition, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2467.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 491.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02443991853 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77241555527 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484725050916 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 776.7 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7904482009 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8846153846 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8846153846 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.96153846154 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251798356953 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733239172129 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845081996877 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15161624617 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957487637716 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.