Essay topics: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Reading is more educational than watching movies or TV.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the increased popularity of the technological advancements like television, internet, telephone ,etc. Many fields braced new technology, similary educational institutes are accomodating such devices in enhancing the learning.In my opinion, I disagreee with the statement that reading is more educational than watchin movies or TV.
Firstly, I think visual aids could drastically improve the learnings, by viewing attractive pictures and animated videos clips, which could help the person to remember thoughts easily. In the recent researches, it has been concluded that the visual aids could help the learner to understand teachings when compare to the textbooks or similar reading matterials .I would like to state my own example here, When I statered learning new words for the TOEFL exam, I studied from the application that showed me pictures which were related to the words and as a result it has helped me to remeber words for a longer time.Similary TVs and movie shows presents visual aids which could help the person in education too.
Secondly, there are ample documentary shows and movies available on the news channels like BBC, Geography now, Discovery and many others. These documentry movies are educational and interesting at the same time. whereas, the reading articles or tome of books could be dull and as a result could reduce the person's interest. Recently I watched a movie on Artifical Intelligence and it's future, It was informational as it improved my understanding about future era and computer's algorithms.
Moreover, TV shows and movies could not only help you to learn about educational information, It could help you to understand and learn other aspects of live which are important in the long run for example Acting , Romance, Speaking, listening, etc. However, books or reading articles are not that instruct how to dance, act, speak that clearly. Here I would like to tell you a short story of my friend who just recently score full marks in listening section of the IELTS examination, he said to me that by watching english movies and shows, he developed a good understanding of British accent.
However, there are cases where reading could help a person to understand some parts which a still not covered by some movies or tv shows for example like cultural history written in different languages. But in my opinion in upcoming time, the movies and other digital platform would cover those missing educational materials too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, whereas, for example, i think, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2086.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24120603015 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83804681213 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560301507538 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.403383891 48.9658058833 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.461538462 100.406767564 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6153846154 20.6045352989 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.45110844103 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168089070826 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649070922949 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529557580115 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110924087108 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538097336006 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 11.7677419355 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.