Do you agree or disagree with the following statements?
Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is evident that nowadays, societies are facing hectic modern lives in which every individual should be able to do multiple tasks at the same time. Personally, I believe that the contemporary generation has to stimulate lots of work in a brief part of the time, and this causes many defects in their tasks. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, being busy these days do not let people concentrate on the tasks as much as they have. One of the things that can lead a job to be more accomplished and perfect is concentration. Concentrating is the ability which needs more time to gain by people, which means to become entirely focused on something you should devote more time to that subject. However, time is the most valuable thing, and we lack it in our daily life. For instance, when I was at university, I had three exams in one day. I could not focus on each of them as much as I had to. The lack of concentration resulted in decreasing my grades. Therefore, the imperfect tasks are because of the lack of time to become focused on specific issues in individuals.
Secondly, these days, people are exhausted, and it leads them to do more inaccurate tasks. When people are so busy, and they do not have any time to do whatever they want for themselves, it results in getting tired more and more every single day. People cannot have fun during their spare time, so they cannot become relax appropriately. Less relaxation makes people's jobs to be more inefficient. For example, my brother is a nurse, and once he had to be at the hospital for several days. When he got home after his work, his boss called him and told him that he made a massive mistake because he did not give one patient his tablets. Being tired made him not to provide the patient's drugs.
To put it in a nutshell, I think that having to do multiple tasks at one time makes people make more errors, in contrast, when they are doing just one job because of lacking concentration and being exhausted as well.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52688172043 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55731501764 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52688172043 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7011622424 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6315789474 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5789473684 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181864059009 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550850452157 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654018112441 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120728332843 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408776322377 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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