Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People*s preference may differ when it comes to consider whether the teachers are more influencing than their friends. But when people are asked about this topic, I bet a lot of people would agree that the teachers are more influencing people in our life for few reasons. As far as I am considered, the teachers are real role-model, they went through enormous amount of challenges, experienced more than friends.
To begin with, we cannot imagine ourselves without our schoolteachers, course teachers and also our parents are the best influencer, teachers in real life. It is widely believed that if you find your life-mentor, you can say you are the luckiest person in the world. Admittedly, I profoundly agree that most people have found their life role-model as their teacher and follow their track. By way of example, I can recall my meditation teacher, Shri Shri Ravi Shankar, enlightened person in our universe, and spread his love and care through his developed techniques and practices. I would love to hear his lecture and do his practices because he does not care what religious you have, or he will not discriminate based on your race. He wants people to release their stress, feel happiness and inner peace according to your body movement such as yoga and few minutes of meditation. I think I am lucky to participate his program and consider him as my spiritual mentor of my life.
In addition to the people*s role-model or mentor of their life, teachers should be respected because they have done many things compared to us. They have huge experiences which could not described as a word. They can play an important role in our life such as guiding you to the right way, allowing you to make right decision or giving valuable advices. If all people have their own, respectful mentor, they will not go through much difficulties. They can encounter with issues without suffering and handle the problem easily. People tend to find their teacher by themselves, but sometimes it does not work as that way. I believe that good mentor, life-time teacher will be given to you from the God. For instance, my father had a great professor who guided him to become doctor and professor as him. Not only educational but also life lessons and valuable guidance were given to my father. He always appreciated having him in his life even he is died few years ago.
Finally, according to the importance of teachers in life, it does not necessarily to claim that friends are not influencing. Friends also give us huge positive aspect on the way we see the world. The friends offer us a great opportunity to share my stories, knowledges and experiences. I have also strong belief that friends should be considered as valuable influencer in our life. There is no doubt that everybody in the world has own best friend expect some of people who are really lonely and do not like to make new friend.
Form what I discussed so far, I can draw the conclusion that nobody argue we all benefit from teacher*s guidance, valuable advices. It is really important to take care of the teacher if you find one of them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 445, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Shri
...le, I can recall my meditation teacher, Shri Shri Ravi Shankar, enlightened person in our...
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Line 9, column 429, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ectful mentor, they will not go through much difficulties. They can encounter with i...
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Line 13, column 456, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the people') or simply say ''some people''.
Suggestion: some of the people; some people
...in the world has own best friend expect some of people who are really lonely and do not like t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, really, so, for instance, i think, in addition, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 87.0 43.0788530466 202% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2588.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 537.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81936685289 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81386128306 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64221727688 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506517690875 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 799.2 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4723793151 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8518518519 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.03703703704 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 11.8709677419 211% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218874766749 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630352665688 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626483088063 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124270091132 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06484682841 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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