Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
make a decision, doing a job and try new things all accompanied with risks more or less. in this regard, some people hold the view that taking risks are integral part of everyone life, while others maintain opposite view and say it is better doing only thing which know very well. in my view of point, the former point carries more weight. I will try to examine the below my reasons for this purpose.
the first reason that should be stated here is that successfully taking risks and learning new thing are integral part of life. in the past knowledge was not shared freely due to lake of proper means and experts were restricted to certain section of the society. whereas, modern technology have made a lot differences. How? with the potential leaps of information technology massive amount of information can be easily and instanteenously obtained through a computer and well-conected internet. for example, one can learn enough knowledge related to fixating his home pipeline, or wire and so on. finnaly, it may suffer some sorts of injury or damage as a risk, but it woth it because you learn new things.
another subtle point which deserves some words is that besides our proficiency, we need try new things to become again proficient in that field. modern world need people who have comprehensive knowledge and experience. the communication and interchange in various field of science and technology are so inprecedently frequent and vigrous, that general knowledge in specific field works defficiently. so, we can get new information and great experience in contacting with either expert people having specific skill or new things.
However, some people may vote for such suggestion of assign unfamiliar tasks to skilled people. but, I believe through participating in varied new things even with risks, I gain valuable opportunities to convert theoretical knowledge frome book into a kind of real experience. this is by default leading to not only enrich my view, but also make me feel more informed over different subjects and helpful to arousing others curiosity to do and try new things even if with risks.
in conclusion, taking all in to account, I find taking risks' advantages weight much heavier than the possible disadvantages. therefore, I strongly agree with being in position to taking risks instead of stay corner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in my view, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13212435233 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79545203295 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59585492228 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2552012591 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.263157895 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3157894737 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52631578947 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276936354363 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735855637782 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066896407899 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144623483264 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498464704987 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.