Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I am absolutely disagreed. Teachers are not supposed to teach only some pre-selected subjects like mathematics, physics etc. and, they should teach the students how to live, unless there was a specific subject which includes these issues. I think, being teacher does not mean someone, who is just a evaluating machine, but, it consist a meaning beyond our imagination. Teachers are in charge of their student's future and all of them imitate the teacher's attitude and would take it, as a certain exemplary in the life. There are some reasons to support my opinion as follows:
According to my experiences, all students even who were not a good student, respect their teacher any time and any where; The interesting point is that it is not a matter that how the teacher used to behave in their class our with them; An other amazing reaction or point about the reationship between a teacher and students in the future, is that the students would be as submissive as they used to be! Actually, our nature entail it to be respectful in contracting with our mentor, not just teachers. Admittedly, this kind of relationship is a miracle and other people, even who have played an indispensable role in someone's life, would not recieve that. So, based on these psychological backgrounds, how could it be possible that teacher avoid teaching social skills? Their advice entrench easily in the student's minds and teachers are able to affect all aspects of their life.
Behind of the being a teacher, there are some other important roles that could change the society. Needless to say, teachers are the most effective way to change society, even establishing a rvolution. O course, the authorities can take advantages of this viewpoint to brainwash young people into doing somethings which government are not able to ask it directly; For instance, people do not support the government to raise tax on a spesific thing; The ministery of education would be supposed to train teacher to tell the students about the benefits of this plan; At the end, the students would persuade their parents; So, theachers can be the leaders of a big change in the society and they should tell about their social viewpoints to make a good generation.
As a summary, in contrast with most of people that think teachers are just teachers, they are something incredible. They are mentor, parents, leaders, friends. Were it not for teachers, many societies would be remaining in darkness. They should teach the students how they should live to be useful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...cher does not mean someone, who is just a evaluating machine, but, it consist a m...
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Message: Did you mean 'consists'?
Suggestion: consists
...o is just a evaluating machine, but, it consist a meaning beyond our imagination. Teach...
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Line 1, column 446, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...ents future and all of them imitate the teachers attitude and would take it, as a certai...
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Message: Did you mean 'anywhere'?
Suggestion: anywhere
...ent, respect their teacher any time and any where; The interesting point is that it is no...
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Line 2, column 238, Rule ID: AN_OTHER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'another'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: Another
...to behave in their class our with them; An other amazing reaction or point about the rea...
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Line 4, column 32, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ration. As a summary, in contrast with most of people that think teachers are just teachers, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, for instance, i think, in contrast, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2098.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93647058824 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70617492024 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501176470588 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.880513134 48.9658058833 318% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.125 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5625 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195357292005 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590457250475 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502158210021 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12383540169 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278375292769 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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