Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Tourists have different ways by which they can travel in order to have a successful trip. In fact, it is important to have a safe and comfortable journey that will be remembered for a long time. Many people probably travel in a group with tour guides because they will get proper directions and explanations of the historical backgrounds of monuments. In my opinion however, it is better to travel alone for a variety of reasons.
Tour guides are not a priority because they are very expensive. Being a tour guide is a job and the guide has to provide for his family and so charges high prices for trips. For example, if a traveler goes to China it will be more beneficial to explore the country alone. The traveler will be able to go to restaurants and parks all by himself without a strict schedule. He does not have to stick to the preferences of the tour guide which can have high costs. If he gets lost, the locals can help him find his way back for free. So the traveler will save a tremendous amount of money and will use it for more activities in China. As a result, tourists can make the trip worthwhile without spending a lot on a tour guide.
In addition, in this era of technological innovations, I do not think that an assistance of a tour guide is necessary to make a vacation meaningful. Some of those technological advancements include internet services, Wi-Fi accessible tourist locations and smart phones with various apps like google map, virtual tour guide etc. These scientific advancements really help people to be guided by themselves by just following the guidance written or spoken to them. As mentioned in the previous example, a tourist in China can easily understand the best tourist spot in that country by just surfing in Google. Not only that, but also he can read the reviews written on internet by various people about their experiences, which I think is more reliable than a tour guide’s advice which could be biased. In addition, most of the tourists have instant GPS service which easily guide them to the tourist location .Moreover, these days, most of the tourist spots have Wi-fi access which helps everyone to surf and find required information about the vacation spot. All in all, it is obvious that these modern facilities replaces expensive tour guide, thus making the trip more economic and convenient.
People should always consider other ways of having a good time on their own instead of hiring a tour guide. Those who hire an agent to take them around will not enjoy the trip fully because it will cost a lot of money and they will have to follow a strict schedule. Hence, they should try to go alone next time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, thus, while, as to, for example, i think, in addition, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70212765957 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59659560521 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502127659574 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3889416026 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.454545455 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114010683291 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395655043486 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279744343296 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771699962659 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171454039557 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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