Do you agree or disagree?
providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so
governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Nowadays countries progress at a very high pace and compete with each other. There are several things that play an important
role in the development of the country. Governments try to improve facilities and laws in order to make society a better and
greater place to live. Improving facilities like transportation, the Internet, and medical health are some of the things that get a
lot of attention. Some people, belives that providing the internet is not as important as other services that governments offer. In
my opinion, I disagree and believe it is important the government should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
In this essay, I am going to explain three potential reasons to support my idea.
First of all, other services that the government provides already take place in everyone's life, but for internet access, there is
room for growth. Building roads or providing health care has been going on for many years and the government spent a lot on
those projects and it is improved enough to meet our needs. On the other hand, the internet just merged into our lives a few
decades ago. While everyone has access to well-developed roads, so many people in further regions do not have access to the
internet or have a very poor connection through it. Therefore, spending money on increasing internet access for everyone is
logical.
Secondly, in modern societies, everything is going to depend on the internet. With the growth of the internet, most governments
try to maximize the usage of the internet. Modern countries transferring paper works on the internet platform to decrease costs
and save time. For example, about 5 or 6 years ago people have to go to the bank and do various things like purchasing bills,
rents. But now you can just open the bank application and do everything with just one click without going anywhere. So, as the
internet improves, it will have lots of advantages for people and also governments.
Finally, in my opinion, the growth of the Internet will change people's lifestyles. what I mean, is that the Internet will provide
infrastructure for changing the way of doing things. people can do their work remotely from their home or where the Internet is
available. For example, due to our emergency situation the world faces, The coronavirus limited everyone. People can not go
out easily and have to keep a social distance. The world could just survive because of the internet. People can do their shops, tasks, and their purchases with the help of the internet. Businesses that have a lack of the internet in their basis and people
who did not have access to the Internet suffer these days.
To sum up, as I mentioned above, providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so
governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost. There are a lot of advantages, I just talked about three
of them which I think were the important ones
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...n, the Internet, and medical health are some of the things that get a lot of attention. So...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 18, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
...nternet will change peoples lifestyles. what I mean, is that the Internet will provi...
^^^^
Line 19, column 54, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...e for changing the way of doing things. people can do their work remotely from their h...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i mean, i think, such as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2500.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 508.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92125984252 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66899517554 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482283464567 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 769.5 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1870664198 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2857142857 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17857142857 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.53405017921 529% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.522822735848 0.236089414692 221% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138195205319 0.076458572812 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148834185819 0.0737576698707 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15419200759 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136895038967 0.0645574589148 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.