Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is in human nature to aspire to thrive and succeed in whatever situation or aspect of life. However, not everyone perceives success in the same way. There are some who believe that success indicates making tons of money. In this matter, I oppose this view for the reasons I will explore in this essay.
To begin with, not every individual has the same goals he/she wants to achieve, therefore we may not allude that monetary value is the only incentive for success. If making a big profit is the case, and hypothetically, it is realized, then, yes, the person we’re talking about is successful. On the other hand, if we suggest that my dream is to visit Italy, and I were to do so, then we can deduce that I am as successful as the businessman referred. In other words, successful are the people who achieve their aspirations, and hit their intended targets, whatever they may be.
Furthermore, value incites the manifesting of success, thus money cannot be the only mean of attaining it. When we’re born, we’re expected to grow and accomplish the identity of a valuable person- someone who is considerate, open-minded, respectful, and someone who creates value. Accordingly, groups that have built their valuable identity, such as non-profit organizations, cultural movements and a myriad of clubs, work to implement ideas that will contribute to the greater good of all people. On the whole, even though money may be involved in realizing this purpose, it’s not the main motive that drives for success.
Finally, the development of relationships between people makes the most profound form of success, whereas a balance sheet can never entice such an achievement. For instance, the bond between parents and their children outstands any profit- relations with friends, partners, professors and/or colleagues alike. However, money doesn’t join you in such associations.
In summary, earning big amounts of money makes you successful, but as noted before, it’s not the only stimulus. People who achieve their goals, create and are of value, and build connections are considered to be triumphant in the matter alike.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, in summary, such as, talking about, in other words, on the whole, to begin with, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18911174785 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86107994329 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601719197708 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0770613899 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.529411765 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1176470588 5.45110844103 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145254327663 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479156064649 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436066562012 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887644232185 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045970411282 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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