Do you agree or disagree?
It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercise.
In all civilized societies, all human beings are looking for some effective ways to reduce the level of their stress since they would be able to make impeccable decisions when they are calm. Although a plethora of people hold this opinion that watching a movie or reading a book are two perfect way that can help individuals to become relaxed, other disagree with this point of view and believe that doing some exercise is the best way stress reduction. I, to a great extent, hold the latter viewpoint. Among countless reasons, which can vindicate my point of view, I will mention the two most conspicuous ones through the following paragraphs.
The first reason that juts out of my mind easily at the first moment of thinking about this issue is the fact that people who do exercise are healthier. Indeed, not only do physical activities help individuals to have healthy bodies but also these activities have profound effects on their brains abilities. Therefore, these people can cope with their problems easily, and find exact solutions for each one. This means that because of their ready bodies, less amount of anxiety is imposed on them, and they are more relaxed. To give a tangible example, the noteworthy statistics revealed by a recently conducted research in the Massachusetts Institute of Technology (MIT) shown that human beings who do some exercise during their lives, endure less stress than the others. As it is clear, the more people do exercise, the more benefits they will gain.
The second and equally exquisite proof for this assertion is about this importance that doing physical activities provides an opportunity for individuals to become familiar with a great hosts of people. In other words, since modern houses are not spacious, in order to do exercise persons have to go to gyms, parks, and many other similar places. Therefore, they have chances to meet other people and make friends. These friendships are very useful because people can talk with each other that has an excellent influence on the stress reduction. For instance, someone that an issue has occupied his taught, can talk with one of his friends during the exercise and consult with him. Consequently, not only can share his occupation with his friend and decrease his stress but also he can use his friends advice. Hence, having physical activities is more lucrative.
To make a long story short, based on the aforementioned arguments, we may draw the conclusion that it can be more advantageous for people if they do some exercise regularly. This contention is due to the fact that not only does exercise help individuals to be healthier but also by doing so, they would find a large number of friends. Consequently, it is highly appreciated that people have physical activities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: recently conducted research
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, for instance, in other words, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2314.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 464.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98706896552 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61608815059 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510775862069 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 721.8 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4434504535 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.7 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146143341025 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448432940935 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491686832582 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940393454136 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026080675828 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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