Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.
The rapid development of modern technology gives a wonderful opportunity to school teachers and parents to improve a way of formal education for children. In the past, it is hard to teach children due to the lack of modern infrastructures like the Internet and mobile phones. However, as far as I'm concerned, it is much easy to educate children now than in the past because of three rationales which I can elaborate on hereunder.
To begin with, what kids are studying through textbooks are very limited and outdated. In contrast, online surfing provides up to date and more information with detailed diagrams and videos which provides a deeper understanding of the subject. The tremendous opportunity of the internet boom is highly efficacious for children. Hence, educating children is much easier nowadays than before. My college life is a compelling example of this. Our professors always insist us to refer online journals and videos for the better understanding of topics as our textbook had minimal and limited data. As a result, our college had 100 percent pass in the year that I finished my college. This specific example shows how easy to get information to boost our knowledge than in earlier times.
Next, due to the lack of attention by parents as they need to focus more on their employments, lot of parents are now encouraging children to use cellphones to ameliorate knowledge of children. Social media like youtube and Facebook not only provides the opportunity for them to study but also to engage in arts and culinary works. Moreover, games can improve children's team player quality and concentration.
Last, in conditions like a global pandemic, COVID-19, teachers are providing online classes that students can attend through television or their phones. Nevertheless, If there is no internet now, this idea will be a dream that can indelibly affect a student's education.
All in all, by taking all the points into account, I vehemently assure that educating children is a much easier task due to the advent of modern technology than the past. It not only gives additional knowledge but also inculcates other qualities despite the absence of parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, in contrast, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12324929972 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87757019085 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563025210084 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.797015832 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.611111111 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190493667724 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054512928842 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568444806394 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100006257715 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474726448601 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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