Essay topics: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your
At the turn of the new century, with the development of humans and modern technology, more and more people tend to explore new things, especially, young generation. Although many people would argue that the belief that in the past teachers had more respect, In my opinion, Nowadays, more and more people cognize of teachers’ roles in a nation since they are as a role model for students, and also they make the biggest contribution in society. I would suggest two reasons based on my general facts in addition to my personal experiences to support the argument.
The first aspect to point out is that many benefits quickly stem from our respect to our teacher. Admittedly, there has been a positive correlation between respect the instructors and success of society and individuals. I would like to mention noteworthy research conducted by CSR institute in India. the discovered result suggest that Seventy-Five Percent of the young generation indulge themselves to listening to their teacher more than their parents, due to children spend most of their time in a school, so the teachers leave a profound impact on them even more than their parents.
Secondly, teachers have a close tie-in motivation and creativity. I still affirm the same idea because there is no guarantee that the respect and Appreciation has a great importance on the quality of one's life. there is proverb in my country, that said "Likewise nuts that need dirt environment to grow, Appreciation is vital for growing and becoming valuable person"; consequences, when they receive this respect by society they allocate their time for teaching new things to children to improving the country due to teachers are most important corner to developing a society. For example, if students make mistake and do something wrong, they must accept their mistake and apologize. According to recent research conducted in my country, psychologists are in the convention that teachers have a pivotal role in opening a new window in front of students. Hardly can anyone make headway in his life without a supportive teacher. As a result, teachers provide an opportunity for children to have a golden future.
To draw a conclusion, taking what I mentioned above, I strongly believe that teachers have respect in society because of his role in expanding knowledge and nurturing students because the success person doesn't receive help from his parent only, but also from their teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17794486216 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86839888047 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548872180451 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.1212829236 48.9658058833 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.733333333 100.406767564 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161697403127 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491914103202 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332976042024 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928608856411 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430317967493 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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