Essay topics: Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them
In this global world children lie to play computer games. Nowadays children not use to play with others in natural environment. I agree with the statment which says playing computer games is awaste of time and children should not be allowed to play them. I feel this way for two main reasons which I explore in this following essay.
First, Children limited in one framwork while playing computer games. Most of the children adicted to play games in full of the day. They don't have any sense to communicate with the surrounding environment. Even they don't want to eat or drink. Most of the children don't know games to playin outside with others who are in same age such as hide and sick, build toy houses, climb the small tree. My own experience is acompelling example of this. My sister's son always lie to play computer games. One day my sister left home. On that time she told his son to take cloths keep in out side the hose if rains come. Eveninig sister when came home she saw all the cloths were wet and still it was in outside. The rain came and went off. But till now son don't know rained in out side because he was playing games.
Second, chilren play computer games, its make decrease the thinking abilty and loss of the memory. Becase they always focus in to play games. They don't think about other things. They don't want to keep anything in their memory such as day to day life, subject matters, communication with others. For instance, one of my friend's daugther was very cleaver girl and she took good marks for her subjects. After some semesters in high school shee use to played computer games. even My friend didn't tell her to anything. Later she got very less marks for all the subjects and she got more upset with depress. s The my friends show her daugther to doctor. Then doctor told she loss the thinking ablity much better like as before.Because she got habit to play computer games most of the time.
In conclusion, Istrongly believe that children not suppose to play computer games and it wast the time. This is because children limited in one framework and decrease the thinking ability by loosing memory.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, still, then, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60574412533 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23105789191 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530026109661 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4377740246 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6785714286 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.45110844103 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358263534684 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100649473809 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137251391722 0.0737576698707 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265631780025 0.150856017488 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12608503966 0.0645574589148 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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