Everyone wants to be as healthy as possible. Fortunately, in modern society there are many things that people can do to improve their physical condition. What do you think is the best way to stay healthy?
a) Get exercise on a regular basis, b) Eat healthy food every day, c) Visit a doctor for regular examinations
Throughout the decade, it was essential for people to choose a way to be as healthy as possible. Some people prefer to get exercise daily and check up their health regularly. However, I firmly believe that for having a healthy body, we should have a healthy diet, and it is an important issue that we have to know. There are two reasons why I think this is critically important, which I will elaborate in the following essay.
The first remarkable point to be mentioned is that eating healthy food prevents obesity, which is the cause of many serious illnesses. Unhealthy food causes many diseases such as diabetes, cancer, and so on. With eating food that lacks nutrients, our metabolisms are disrupted, and our defense system will be weak. My grandfather is a compelling example of this. When he was a young man, he was fit. Despite he ate many things, such as unhealthy food, but he didn't have any diseases. Finally, when he became an older man, several diseases appeared in his body, such as diabetes. Had he had a healthy diet, he would not have many diseases.
The second reason I would like to mention is that eating healthy food gives us a lot of energy, which causes us to succeed in our personal and professional duties. If we don’t have enough energy, we cannot do any work, and we always feel tired and sleepy. For instance, when I was a university student, I deleted two meals-breakfast and dinner-because, I was very busy, and I didn't have enough time to eat food. In the class, I always felt lethargic, and I couldn't concentrate very well. Because of this, my grades dropped. After a while, I changed my diet, and it helped me to do my works excellent.
To wrap it up, all the reasons mentioned above lead us to the conclusion that a healthy diet causes us to have a healthy body with the best physical condition. This is because eating the right food prevents obesity, and healthy food gives us a lot of energy to keep up with our duties.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, well, while, for instance, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59375 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63862651464 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511363636364 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3383293846 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.85 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206337709448 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605820291518 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612031700873 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136443349948 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547479544652 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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