the extended family is less important now than in the pass.
Family has enormous leverage on our quotidian routine life. It influence in a direct and intangible ways. It is utteely important to appreciate the its role because of its indelible impact on the society. Although some people hold the view point that our kinship still plays a pivotal role in our life today as in te past. However, others may hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. In my perception and actual life observation which has led me to agree with the idea that our family root have less impress in our contemporary time. In the following essay, I shall delve inot the most outstanding reasons.
To commence with, the enormous distance that separate people from their relatives effect negatively on their relation. Due to life complexity today, people follow their jobs, passion, and dreams. Indeed, this cause most of the people to travel to a different region and eventually led to loss the strong bond between the family member. For instance, my family are a big one with many cousins and aunts, we use to attend a family meeting each month at the weekend. Many of us travel and leave the country due to the conflicts that take place during 2006, The situation never been better. Eventually, the meeting never held again and at the same time due to involved most of us in his jobs to search for better life stander at the foreign country, the importance of our extended family get weaked day after day. Apparently, it must be taken into account that all the family are collected in their origin country in the past decade, so their relation are built strongly.
In addition, this relation get raised because most people have no time to pursue these relation. Today the burden of life increased dramatically and consume almost all our times. People are even works at weekend to provide a good welfare and quality of life for his family. For example, many taxes, bills, house rent, and insurance need sto pay monthly. This surely consume people time and effect their leisure with their relatives. Moreover, because the time left for enjoyment are very little , they try to spend it with their alliances because they have many common interest.
To sum up, after contemplating the reasons that I mentioned before, taking all the factors into consideration, I reinforce my idea that our kinrealtion are not momentum as in the past because of wide distance that separate us from our relatives and no available time to enjoy this relation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...of its indelible impact on the society. Although some people hold the view point that ou...
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...big one with many cousins and aunts, we use to attend a family meeting each month a...
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Message: Did you mean 'this relation' or 'these relations'?
Suggestion: this relation; these relations
...ause most people have no time to pursue these relation. Today the burden of life increased dra...
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...eople time and effect their leisure with their relatives. Moreover, because the t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2053.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86492890995 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48034598444 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542654028436 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3475106827 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7619047619 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0952380952 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7619047619 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0871328884171 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0249188859763 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376474810403 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0477359880056 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486027255538 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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