In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. USe specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
A whole range of environmental factors – from ecological to social ones – influences people in their lifetime. In addition to individual biological features, all of them directly affect their vital activity, health, and, ultimately, lifespan. In this essay, three reasons will be considered as a possible explanation for the phenomenon of increased longevity.
First, lifestyle, namely proper nutrition, healthy sleep, sport activities and elimination of bad habits, the most common of which are cigarettes, alcohol drinks and drugs, has a huge impact on longevity. Obviously, this list can be continued infinitely, though the important part here is what measures governments are taking for a healthy lifestyle. Primarily, advertisement which is everywhere. On cigarette packs, there are pictures of people with terrible diseases that cigarettes lead to. On advertising billboards, we observe how a person who eagerly eats a hamburger and chips contrasted to an athlete who drinks water. Consequently, considerable attention is paid to the quality of food; therefore, technological standards for its production are set. Given the above, it can be concluded that governments are responsible for longevity of peoples.
Second, a significant leap in the development of medicine compared with human prehistory has its influence on the increase of the lifespan. It is well known that primitive people did not possess such knowledge and technology that the modern world now owns, as evidenced by the smaller number of diseases that cannot be treated, as well as the lack of epidemics such as smallpox or plague. In addition, the population is vaccinated against such viruses as the flu every year. Otherwise, the body would need the use of medicines, which, in turn, also have a negative effect on other organs, such as the liver, poor functioning of which reduces the lifespan. The longevity of people would not have received growth without high-quality medical support.
Third, thermal power stations, automobile transport, enterprises for the production of zinc, plumbum, mercury have also a large impact on human health. To prevent the accumulation of harmful substances in the body, worsening of the respiratory tract, nervous system disorders, factories are built in areas where people do not live. Incidentally, work is underway to create an electric car, which will not emit harmful substances into the atmosphere polluting the air. Understandably, the better the quality of the environment is, the better human health is; these two indicators are closely interconnected. Living in the fresh air, away from factories and main roads, and also taking care of the state of the environment, contributes to the growth of lifespan.
In summary, possible causes of the phenomenon that people are generally living longer are the correct lifestyle, the development of medicine and the state of the environment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, incidentally, second, so, therefore, third, well, in addition, in summary, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2466.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45575221239 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04844457578 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590707964602 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 783.0 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6546434089 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.428571429 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5238095238 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.19047619048 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155924691435 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392926519734 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703483478423 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109646634586 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103418969328 0.0645574589148 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 86.8835125448 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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