If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose?
When people grew up, they have to choose their job and they often leave behind subject of studies that interest them. Consequently, if i had the opportunity to study a new subject, I would choose geography for three reasons that I will detailed in the following paragraphs.
First, geography would enable me to have a better idea of the world that surrounds me and therefore be more integrated in society. For example, if I meet someone immigrating from a foreign country while I cannot locate this country on a glob, I will be lost in the discussion I won’t be able to answer and ask questions about this foreign culture. Consequently, knowing geography is a first step to be open-minded to new cultures.
Secondly, beyond a cultural benefit, learning geography allows me to broaden my vision and encouraged me to travel abroad, to discover countries, to overcome fear because it alleviates the unknown. For example, when commercial people are dealing with foreigners, they always learn the cultures and the behaviors of the country before travelling to be less stressed and worried of not knowing its habits. This subject also creates a social bond between people.
Finally, geography makes possible to understand social and political conflicts around the world and therefore helps to understand our present situation. For example, it explains wars and civil conflicts in the oriental countries. Knowing the history and the resources of countries justifies the political decisions taken. In the history, frontiers changed a lot because governmental people were greedy about resources in other countries, for example, a lot of occidental countries went in Africa to exploit their mineral resources.
As a conclusion, I would study geography if I had the opportunity in order to improve my knowledge, to create a first social bond with foreigners and to better understand the overall situation in the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'detail'
Suggestion: detail
...geography for three reasons that I will detailed in the following paragraphs. First, ...
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Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'immigrates'.
Suggestion: immigrates
...society. For example, if I meet someone immigrating from a foreign country while I cannot l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23624595469 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91587017658 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546925566343 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0162698259 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.461538462 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101243397202 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405294963152 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622779596834 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733425384378 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809588967023 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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