Imagine you could improve the town where you live by changing one important thing about it. Which of the following would you choose to do?
Build additional parks
Construct more libraries
Improve public transportation
Use specific details and examples in your answer. Do not use memorized examples.
Due to hectic life in a city, people who live in a big town have several problems such as the lack of adequate facilities and air good quality. All streets always full of cars and they are too crowded. If I could do something for my town, it is defiantly improving public transportation. I paragraph will aptly substantiate my point of view.feel that way for two main reasons. The following
First of all, improving public transportation will decrease the amount of air pollution. Air pollution causes health problems and it costs lots of expenses for the health care system. So if the government doesn't have to spend more money on health care, more money will be saved for other works such as building additional parks and libraries. my town personal experience is compelling of the evidence for it. Ten years ago, a mayor was elected. he improved public transportation by adding some electric buses and subway stations. It not only has decreased the number of cars driving through the streets but also improved the quality of air. as a result, we have had fewer accidents and fewer health problems. After seven years the mayor announced that they could save money to build a new park.
Second, the cost of living in big cities will be declined by improving public transportation. these days, we have to pay for expenses, especially for commuting. The price of oil and gasoline has gone up over several decades, and the costs of maintaining and use cars have also increased dramatically. Therefore the best way to reduce our expenses is by using public transportation. For example, my brother works downtown, but he lives suburb which doesn't have convenient transportation. Thus, he had to buy a car. It costs a lot of money at first. He also has to spend a lot of money on gasoline every day and spend a lot of time to find a parking space. If he could use public transportation, he would not have all these expenses and problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75964391691 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82550239733 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543026706231 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0774510595 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9090909091 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3181818182 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141519705494 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443288631275 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477904565402 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101713927455 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168044958221 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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