Imagine that you plan to donate money to help a charity to help people in need. If you could give money to only one type of charitable organization, which one of the following would you choose and why?
-an organization that provides food and housing for people in need
-an organization that gives people money to start their own small business
-an organization that provides medical care to people in need
As time marches on, with the galloping rate of population growth, we witness an increment number of unemployed and poor people having a drastic need to receive help from some social-established organization. I drastically admire and also help organizations which help people in the inception of their own business since as a matter of fact, in this manner humans of given society become more and more independent economically and by the same token, they assist society in the path of flourishing and thriving.
Fist and foremost, it is crystal clear that governments invariably are in search for different ways helping to decimate the roots of poverty and instead cultivate seeds of flourishment. In order to satisfy such an amazing intention, some region jointly with the help of private segment start establishing a great number of charities giving people help in many distinctive ways like providing food and housing, giving money for establishing business and that last but not least, providing medical care. It seems the only service helping more in the way of independence is giving an opportunity to initiate a novel career. In other words, by doing this, people in need consider themselves as powerful members of society so much so that the authoritative power of society and wealthy people trust them and provide them with a great chance to show their potentials and abilities. Long story short, providing financial aids, people feel their inner power and begin to become more independent.
Alongside the first reason elaborated above, movement of the whole society toward success is another reason needs meticulous attention. When society helps all members to have their own business, in fact, it helps itself to become more flourishing. In other words, a successful community consists of successful and powerful members. In such a society all people are doing something even it has a partial contribution in comparison to others. The more work and workforce, the more success. Therefore, in this way not only do workers make an excellent income for themselves but also they help the economy to raise up in general.
To wrap it up. no one can cast a debate on the significance of charities in propelling society toward becoming more and more successful since in this way demanding people feel important and powerful which such these emotions channel them into investing more energy in order to work very well. By the same token, working more and more, they help the whole society to thrive and convert their country to a prominent economic power in the world.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, well, in fact, in general, as a matter of fact, in other words, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2153.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1018957346 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81250472623 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526066350711 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.6191150598 48.9658058833 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5625 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.375 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186738370914 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608786484463 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517862434742 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118965861435 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050388221443 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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