Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans
throughout history, human beings has prepetually concerned about how they can reach prosperes in their lives. they have experienced a large number of situations such as studing hard and making relationship with other. some people may hold the view that not only should individuals limit their relatives, but also they should focous on their education to reach their goals. i, nonetheless, contend that the more increasing bonds the more person get chancess to success. in the following paragraphs, I delve into my vantage point throu outstanding view oint.
to begin with, human beings are sociable creature always seeking ways to expand their relatives and establishing strong relationships with other. every single person has own exprience in facing problems that these experiences can be valuable for others to address the same problem encountring with it. this opprotunity helps people solve their problem as soon as possible and saving their time in a excellent time. in other words, every one have limited time to life and it is better for he or she utilize from other experiences since running into problem. for example, last year i started my own business and face with quiet a few problems including how i can manage my company, how i can employ workers and so on. i adress to this problem with consulting with some of my freinds that they had experienced such situation few years ago.
another reason that it is worthwhile to mention is that making relationship and maintaioning them is a significant ability that it helps individuals to have a peace in their lives. one of the most important aspects of successful is having a life without stress and strain. this ability teach people how they can coaborate with each other and do teamworking. since people learn how they can intensify these skills in themselves , they are able to have calm and relaxing life. humanbeings whether want or not relating with other peoples. for example, i have experienced to do scholl's project in form a team working. at the early stage , i didnot become familliar with teamworking and coaboration , it was caused to my groups could not progress in its work after i could adjust myself with coworkers , we could progress swifter than past.
to sum up, as above mentioned, i believe that making good relationship is more beneficial that studying hard. this is becuase of people not only learn how to enjoy other expriences but also boost some abilities such as team working and coaboration. i think since individuals can establish strong bonds , they are able to more prosperess without spending time on studing hard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nonetheless, so, while, for example, i think, such as, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2180.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03464203233 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71512547419 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54272517321 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9309584442 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.80952381 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.619047619 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47619047619 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.5376344086 596% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143229580922 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487834361851 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02678233412 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943876846501 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263333018451 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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