In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
throughout history, human beings have perpetually been concerned about the ways they can do their works and they have experienced quite a few fashions to finish them. some people may hold the view that not only should individuals not take time to do their works but also it is no matter if their works have some mistakes and flaws. I, nonetheless, believe that the more doing accurate the more someone is successful and relax. in addition by doing correct, someone can exhibit his or her talented character. in the following paragraphs, I delve into my viewpoint through three outstanding reasons.
to begin with, in today's world people seek for being successful. therefore, they should perform their activities in an excellent way. in other words, nowadays competition is very high compared to past so that people do not have the opportunity for doing wrong. they should be aware of to catch the opportunities and show their best.
another reason that it is important to mention is that individuals always have a concern regarding this issue how they can reduce their stress and be relax in their society where is full of violent and difficulty. one of the best ways for reaching soothe in their lives is doing their job with a minimum fault is.
the last but not least, by acting in a careful way, people can boost some qualities such as self-confidence and self-expression. these features are the most noticeable factors helping them to show their abilities to others and grasp the opportunity in order to stabilize their situation in the society. as people spend more time doing their businesses they will be able to think more about other aspects of their work.
to sum up, as mentioned above, I contend that people should their jobs and tasks in a good way. this is because they can not only reduce their strain but only be prosperous. furthermore, they can display the specific aspects of their personality with being self-confidence. that is why I prefer to suggest everyone do his or her best without wrong and mistake.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, nonetheless, regarding, so, therefore, in addition, such as, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90462427746 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70168148185 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554913294798 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0450294731 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2777777778 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0731504773462 0.236089414692 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0266807025803 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393059999793 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0438363923762 0.150856017488 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411119374398 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.