Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans

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Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans

The coats of domestic dogs are of two varieties: "double" being common with dogs (as well as wolves) originating from colder climates, made up of a coarse guard hair and a soft down hair, or "single", with the topcoat only.

Domestic dogs often display the remnants of countershading, a common natural camouflage pattern. A countershaded animal will have dark coloring on its upper surfaces and light coloring below,[46] which reduces its general visibility. Thus, many breeds will have an occasional "blaze", stripe, or "star" of white fur on their chest or underside.[47]

Regarding coat appearance or health, the coat can be maintained or affected by multiple nutrients present in the diet, see Coat (dog) for more information.
Tail
See also: Docking

There are many different shapes for dog tails: straight, straight up, sickle, curled, or cork-screw. As with many canids, one of the primary functions of a dog's tail is to communicate their emotional state, which can be important in getting along with others. In some hunting dogs, however, the tail is traditionally docked to avoid injuries.[48] In some breeds, such as the Braque du Bourbonnais, puppies can be born with a short tail or no tail at all.[49]
Differences from wolves
The Saarloos wolfdog carries more gray wolf DNA than any other dog breed[50]

Despite their close genetic relationship and the ability to inter-breed, there are a number of diagnostic features to distinguish the gray wolves from domestic dogs. Domesticated dogs are clearly distinguishable from wolves by starch gel electrophoresis of red blood cell acid phosphatase.[51] The tympanic bullae are large, convex and almost spherical in gray wolves, while the bullae of dogs are smaller, compressed and slightly crumpled.[52] Compared with equally sized wolves, dogs tend to have 20% smaller skulls and 30% smaller brains.[53]:35 The teeth of gray wolves are also proportionately larger than those of dogs.[54] Dogs have a more domed forehead and a distinctive "stop" between forehead and nose.[55] The temporalis muscle that closes the jaws is more robust in wolves.[4]:p158 Wolves do not have dewclaws on their back legs, unless there has been admixture with dogs that had them.[56] Most dogs lack a functioning pre-caudal gland and enter estrus twice yearly, unlike gray wolves which only do so once a year.[57] So-called primitive dogs such as Dingoes and Basenjis retain the yearly estrus cycle.[58]

Dogs generally have brown eyes and wolves almost always have amber or light colored eyes.[59] The skin of domestic dogs tends to be thicker than that of wolves, with some Inuit tribes favoring the former for use as clothing due to its greater resistance to wear and tear in harsh weather.[60] The paws of a dog are half the size of those of a wolf, and their tails tend to curl upwards, another trait not found in wolves.[61] The dog has developed into hundreds of varied breeds, and shows more behavioral and morphological variation than any other land mammal.[62] For example, height measured to the withers ranges from a 6 inches (150 mm) in the Chihuahua to 3.3 feet (1.0 m) in the Irish Wolfhound; color varies from white through grays (usually called "blue") to black, and browns from light (tan) to dark ("red" or "chocolate") in a wide variation of patterns; coats can be short or long, coarse-haired to wool-like, straight, curly, or smooth.[63] It is common for most breeds to shed their coat.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , [
... upper surfaces and light coloring below,[46] which reduces its general visibility...
^^
Line 9, column 11, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
.... Tail See also: Docking There are many different shapes for dog tails: straight, straigh...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, thus, well, while, for example, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2970.0 1977.66487455 150% => OK
No of words: 564.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26595744681 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87326216964 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22215566171 2.67179642975 121% => OK
Unique words: 320.0 212.727598566 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567375886525 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 850.5 618.680645161 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 20.1344086022 348% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 598.524944656 48.9658058833 1222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 371.25 100.406767564 370% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.5 20.6045352989 342% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.625 5.45110844103 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0733196226576 0.236089414692 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033096856453 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0226564891326 0.0737576698707 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0366625660499 0.150856017488 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018916560751 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.6 11.7677419355 328% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.89 58.1214874552 15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 10.1575268817 289% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.47 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.22 8.01818996416 140% => OK
difficult_words: 147.0 86.8835125448 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 30.0 10.0537634409 298% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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