It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.
In the modern era, the issue of whether or not children gain merits pints if they select a career similar to parents or different from them has a great deal of attention from young people and sociologists. Although some may say that select different jobs children become independent and autonomous and by working hard any person become a success; I, as well as many others, believe that by choosing a career as the same as parents, children have opportunities to become a successful and prosperous person sooner than expected.
First of all, an important reason why working in the parent’s field has several advantage points for children is that the risk of failure is decreased. Fathers and mothers have been working in their field for several years; hence, they have a lot of information and experience about it. They know that if they want to continue or staring as a beginning, what they must do until they become flourishing and prosperous in the future. In this situation, children would use their parent’s experiences, and they become successful by a minimum rate of failure. Also, parents have a broad horizon about the future this ability helps children to reduce the risk of failure on their works.
Another reason for this point of view is that they can learn many subjects from their parents. Parents have been working in their jobs since they were teenagers. So they have enough information about many subjects that related to the work. In this situation, without any doubts, parents share all the knowledge and information with their children for progress in their work without any censure of them. However, if young people want to select new jobs, their employer would not get all information to them, and they will face many problems during learning it.
Finally, it is occasionally said that choosing parents' job is better because children could exploit the credit and the popularity of their family name. In many jobs having the credit among other coworkers or being prominent among the customers can cause rapid promotion and development. For instance, when your family owns a famous brand, you do not need to try for finding a position in the market because you already have it.
In conclusion, considering the ideas presented in the paragraphs above, I personally believe that it is better for children to choose their parents' job than different ones chiefly due to a better chance for prosperity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
In the modern era, the issue of whether or not children gain merits pints if they sele...
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Line 1, column 528, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...prosperous person sooner than expected. First of all, an important reason why wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2045.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03694581281 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59797580229 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502463054187 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.2067637285 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.8125 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.375 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379114512777 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135975454507 0.076458572812 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119355775299 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247292430134 0.150856017488 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984055983665 0.0645574589148 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.