It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Although many individuals claim that a routine and daily program for job is better, But I do not think so. I prefer to have more days free to do my desired activities. I feel this way for 3 main reasons which I will explore them in the following essay.
First, doing some official activities are possible at morning; For example, last week I was invited to my daughter's school for a meeting, and I had many trouble for getting a permit from my boss. Also consider, you may need to do some other stuffs such as going to bank, government related emergencies, etc. that is doable only in morning.
Second reason for preferring a free day may be due to some programs for going to university, trips with family and friends. Last mount, I attended in a tour program at Kashan as one of famous city in Iran to visit the preparation of perfume from local medical plants which it is held only once in each year. It was very interesting and introduced me with their traditional culture. Had not I a whole day, I will not enjoy from morning sunshine in nature until beautiful sunset in evening.
Last but not least, having private time is necessary to mental and physical organization for humankind. consider, a snowy day in winter that you feel to need walking on white snow with out any concern about your job. How it can be inspirative! It is advisable that you have a day free without any occupation or duty alone and even far from your family!
In all, what drives someone to choose job with 3 days a week for long hours instead of routine 5 days a week for shorter hours, may fall into 3 main categories including official emergencies, special events, and refreshing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun trouble seems to be countable; consider using: 'many troubles'.
Suggestion: many troubles
...ughters school for a meeting, and I had many trouble for getting a permit from my boss. Also...
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Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: I_A[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am' (first person of "to be")?
Suggestion: am
...th their traditional culture. Had not I a whole day, I will not enjoy from mornin...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consider
...nd physical organization for humankind. consider, a snowy day in winter that you feel to...
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Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
... you feel to need walking on white snow with out any concern about your job. How it can ...
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Line 9, column 39, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to job'
Suggestion: to job
... In all, what drives someone to choose job with 3 days a week for long hours inste...
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Line 9, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...encies, special events, and refreshing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, for example, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56478405316 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57718671614 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611295681063 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.1007501682 48.9658058833 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.692307692 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324274750748 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976604443768 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809597218798 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179679467703 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719981218745 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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