It is more important to read or watch news presented by people whose views are different from your own than it is to read or watch news presented by those whose views are similar to your own.
It is axiomatic that in this progressive and complicated world where we live, human beings have to be informed about news that occurs in every corner of the world. In this regard, while many people hold the opinion that people have to keep in touch with the only news that contains information with their beliefs, on the contrary, some individuals believe that follow the news that they are against people's notion. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion and my reasons to support my idea are presented in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, it is crystal clear that we live in an era called blast of information. In fact, due to the advance of technology people are provided with a wide range of media that presented a lot of news and information from various beliefs. To be more specific, in contemporary time's people have to be aware of different news from various sources, since these days many individuals make their own decisions due to the news. My own experience brings this notion of home. A few years ago, before Iran election- which held every 4 years- I decided to sell my dollars and change my savings money into the gold coin. So I followed news from a radio station that is advertised and everyday announces that it is safer that people to but gold before the election, however, one of my friends suggested me read news through Donayaye Eghtesad newspaper, after a few weeks that I read the news in the newspaper, I found out that the radio station was not totally honest with people, so I decided to maintain my dollars and after the election, it became clear for everyone that they had not listened to a source of news.
Moreover, due to the fact that people have a wide range of circle of friends, it is better for individuals to read news through different newspapers, websites, magazines to name but a few.
To put it into a vivid picture, if a person inclines into the only newspaper that he buys it every day, he won't take advantage of other standpoints, While many people follow news from a wide variety of sources. Consequently, in a meeting with fellows an individuals who do not listen to different news can not express his own idea since his or her information is not sufficient to begin a debate. Finally, not only his or her friends find out the information and knowledge that he or she is gained is only lying on a specific media but also that does not account for his opinions.
In conclusion, having the aforementioned reasons and examples into account, I do believe that be aware of new from different newspapers, TV programs, news channels , etc. help people to make a sound decision and also it is a plus point for individuals in debates between friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 678, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... a radio station that is advertised and everyday announces that it is safer that people ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... had not listened to a source of news. Moreover, due to the fact that people ha...
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Line 6, column 251, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...Consequently, in a meeting with fellows an individuals who do not listen to different news can...
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Line 8, column 164, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t newspapers, TV programs, news channels , etc. help people to make a sound decisi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, however, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2240.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 483.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63768115942 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63880751517 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48033126294 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 710.1 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.3041052006 48.9658058833 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.333333333 100.406767564 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2 20.6045352989 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203216777097 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701703773335 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532099641025 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11414060333 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461857398237 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 11.7677419355 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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